Creator reports on golf course vandalism from @shaneohgolfs

The creator reports on a trend of golf courses being vandalized by people on e-bikes, focusing on a recent incident at Lincoln's Hill in California. He shows images of the damage, explains the high cost of repairs, and uses a previous case in Florida—where a teen faced felony charges for $160,000 in damage—as a cautionary tale. He concludes by stating the California incident is also being investigated as a felony and implies that the surrounding community's security cameras will help identify the culprits.

Creator: @shaneohgolfs on Instagram

Video format

Talking Head Edit

Video outline

  1. Present an act of injustice
  2. Show it's a recurring pattern
  3. Detail severe consequences
  4. Imply inevitable capture

Narrative framework

The Community Justice Report

Narrative framework logic

To report on a specific act of injustice, frame it as part of a larger, troubling trend, and build a case for severe consequences, ultimately empowering the audience to participate in the resolution.

Topics: Golf, Current Events, Public Safety

Concepts: Headlines, Public Service Announcement, Case Study Reminder

Formats: Talking Head Edit

Elements: B-Roll Cutaway, Screenshot as Evidence, Title Text Hook

Account types: Personal Brand

Transcript excerpt

This has gotten so insanely out of hand. Yet again, another golf course has been destroyed by e bikes. We've seen this all over the place, Maryland, down in Florida. Now we go over to California to Lincoln's Hill Good Course. And this right here is not just having a good time with your friends. That's straight up vandalism. This green is completely destroyed. They're going to have to replace the entire thing, which is gonna run them about 15 to $30,000 But let me be the first person to remind any kid out there with an e bike or any parent with a kid that has an e bike. This is Venetian Bay down in Florida rank just a few months ago tier course was destroyed with $160,000 worth of damage. The kid, 17 years old and he currently faces three felony charges. And the same exact thing is happening at Lincoln Hills. The police and the golf course are treating this as a felony. And the worst part for whoever did this, Lincoln Hills is a 36 hole track completely surrounded by homes with rank cameras. And funny enough, the last couple times we've posted videos exactly like this, we've gotten anonymous leads that help find the suspect. The Internet is an

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