Hitchhiking onto private golf courses from @countryclubhitchhiker

The creator continues his series of trying to get onto private golf courses by standing on the side of the road with a sign. After a couple of cars stop, he finds a young member named Liam who agrees to a 9-hole match for $250. The creator expresses his surprise at how easily he found a game and his slight nervousness about the financial stakes before heading to the course to meet his opponent.

Creator: @countryclubhitchhiker on Instagram

Video format

Vlog

Video outline

  1. Present high-stakes challenge
  2. State overarching mission
  3. Introduce unexpected opponent
  4. Negotiate terms of conflict
  5. Set stage for showdown

Narrative framework

The Quest & Confrontation Framework

Narrative framework logic

To document a quest with an ambitious goal, where the primary narrative tension comes from an unexpected, on-the-spot challenge from a stranger that escalates the stakes and sets up a future conflict.

Topics: Golf, Lifestyle

Concepts: Challenge, Day X of Doing Y, Journey Documentation

Formats: Vlog

Elements: Text Overlay, Jump Cut, Montage Editing

Account types: Personal Brand

Transcript excerpt

$500 match. Better if you win, I'll give you a $200 in club credit. Welcome to day three of trying to hitchhike onto every private golf course in the state of Utah. So she could play at, like, 03:30. Oh, gosh. We got another kid here. What's happening? Everybody's pulling up on me. I thought the course was shut down. Nine holes walking over. You'll just play a nine hole match with me. Please introduce yourself. I'm William. I'm Brett Willow Creek. What's your handicap? About a one, one or two. We're gonna play a nine hole match. Yes, sir. If you beat me, I will pay you $250 because we're not playing 18 holes. K. Let's do it. Alrighty. Let's do it. 02:40. I am only ten to fifteen minutes in, and I only had two people stop. This is starting to get a little easy. Well, I'm excited to play Liam and hopefully no lose my money. Sorry, baby. Look at that hair. That's some good looking hair right there. What's up with these younger sticks picking me up? I don't think I can afford this long term.

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