Creator analyzes viral golf incident from @shaneohgolfs

The creator analyzes a viral incident where a young man disrupted a PGA tour event for social media clout. He shows the incident, the subsequent lifetime ban from PGA events, and the man's unapologetic reaction video. The creator then frames this event within the larger "shrink the game vs. grow the game" debate in golf, showing other examples of destructive behavior for online engagement, and argues that while growing the game is good, it must be done with respect for etiquette. He concludes by asking the audience for their opinion on whether it's time to "shrink the game."

Creator: @shaneohgolfs on Instagram

Video format

Greenscreen Talking Head

Video outline

  1. State provocative thesis
  2. Show inciting incident
  3. Reveal official consequence
  4. Frame within larger debate
  5. Assign community responsibility

Narrative framework

The Community Commentary Blueprint

Narrative framework logic

Leveraging a specific, controversial incident to make a broader commentary on a community's values, framing it within an existing debate, and concluding with a call for community-led change.

Topics: Golf, Sports

Concepts: Headlines, Breakdown

Formats: Greenscreen Talking Head

Elements: B-Roll Cutaway, Image Overlay, Title Text Hook, Follow / Subscribe CTA

Account types: Personal Brand

Transcript excerpt

It finally might be time to shrink the game. Take a second and watch this clip. Check out. Dude. No. You kidding me? That's a $100. But shockingly enough, the PGA Tier made the right decision. This is a clip of the punishment. Fresh pass you from all future PGA Tour tournaments. If you show up at a PGA Tour tournament again, you'll be arrested. Do you understand that? And then this is the kid making a video after the punishment calling everybody soft, cussing every other three words, and taking zero accountability. Rank after events like this, the shrink the game worse grow the game debate in golf is so strong. You've got half the golfers that wanna shrink the game. They're gonna blame social media and the year tier. And are they wrong? No. Also, if you like golf content like this, make sure you're following. And then the other half that wanna continue to grow the game. And I'll say it. I am one of those people that want the game to continue to grow, but it has to be done the correct way. Every other week, I see videos like this of somebody destroying a green just to get clicks and likes on the Internet. Tier you've got kids like this who are promoting this stuff, and you're gonna

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